Invisible - Comments

AW
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xx

AW!
BLESS!
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You're a great author. I love the way it showed that they forgot her because that really happens to a lot of people. It doesn't necessarily make them bad people, they're just more.. forgetful. Nah, either way it does hurt a lot and it was lovely the way Aled was her supportive friend with the jumpers to cry on. :cute: Bless Aled. I felt quite proud in a way when she started walking off with her iron maiden t shirt and all that, like, yeah! you go! They don't deserve you! and all that. Then Rhyys. Lovely. Lovely. It's always good, if a bit of a shock, to find that feelings of the slushy sort are returned. I like that it was left there too, we don't really know what she chose to do next, whether it's stay with them now that she isn't so invisible or choose to go back to Cardiff and live her life for her rather than for the band.

All in all, it was really, VERY good xx

Awww!
Talk about cute.
And amazing.
I just wanna jump on Aled for being so supportive, him and his festive gems.
I love how you described them all, even if some of it wasn't very nice (like the ignoring Nat stuff), it really brought it to life.
No wonder why Nat's so happy you wrote this for her!!!
You're an amazing writer!

And yay for Rhys love.

xx

Bloody hell...WOW.

That was amazing, one of the best things I've ever read.

The best thing is that I can actually see myself doing a lot of the things I did in the story, as in the way I acted. I also loved that at one point I was wearing an Iron Maiden shirt :tehe:

It was such a sad story at the start and it just got happier at the end.

And the invisible bit, nice touch, because I'm invisible to a lot of people. Like, I do a lot and nobody really notices. So it's nice to have somebody pick up on that.

I really, really enjoyed reading this story. It's my favourite oneshot of yours, it's bloody marvelous :con:

Loved it and love you!

xxxxx