We're Going Live - Comments

There's so much I feel and think right now that I think it'd be way too hard to put it down here in this comment box. So here I taking a crack at it...

I never read Gerard Way stories. I honestly thought they were overdone here on Mibba, and the few ones that I read only the summeries of, they mostly all sounded cliche.
What posessed me to click on 'Once Upon a Time, Back in Highschool...' is beyond me, but I do not regret it one bit.
This story, its plot, and the characters are all attracting, unique, and also beautiful.
I've never read a story on here that made my stomach churn with sickness when there was a gory scene. I've never actually felt a weird or strange sensation in a certain spot on me when a character is described stabbing there. For example, I happened to itch my chest a few times while reading the emotional scene where Gerard kills himself.
That's not the only scene that is vivid and emotional within these past three stories. Hell no.
This whole series has made me feel so many different emotions, has made me thought of different thoughts, and has made me pitch so many different opinions within my head. It's even forced me to almost keep an open mind, which doesn't happen often with me. I'm stubborn.
As much as I dislike Ren's lack of a backbone, I think her character's truly beautiful. I really do.
I'd say that from this story, I would come to the conclusion that if you really truly love someone, you'd overcome their flaws but... I don't know. With some of the things Gerard did, I could be possibly overestimating things. Who knows?
And like a true story should be, you left the ending with so many possibilites, that it makes us go nuts.
For example, who will Charlie go to? How will he grow up? Does Mikey kill himself? If not, what happens to him? Does he find someone and live well or does he have a hard and dark future? Nobody knows. It's simply left to our imaginations to decide.
P.S. I won't say that I was on the verge of tears at the end, because I wasn't, but I did get a lump in my throat. Yes, I'm a hard ass. XD
Anyway, I'd recommend this story to anyone and everyone.
You can expect me to read future creations by you, seeing as you're great, and you'll definitiely stay in my top on my page.
[:

With love and shit,
Caitlin.

this was the most amazing story ever. seriously, some of the best highlights of my days were getting on the check the 2736263 updates for this story. which isn't really an understatement. you update a lot; which is amazing!

anyway. the way you portrayed your characters was just amazing! so different. the story line was brilliant! normally, i hate teacher''student things, but with this, it wasn't like that at all!

rarely to fan fictions make me cry, but this one did. even though it was so sad, then ending was perfect! everything was perfect! i'm going to miss reading it everyday. i know i'll end up reading it again soon. the first installment i've already read twice, but i'm looking forward to reading it again too! and anything else you write too.

i tried to make that epic-ly long for the hell of it... hahaha!

<3

Chapter Fourty Five.
Oh holy shit!
I can't believe it ended that way.
Gah, you told me different scenarios.
I loved how you described his chest, that it was scared.
I loved how you described everything.
It was simply amazing and a really good way to end it.
God, it was so fucking sad!!
You have a way with sadness, that is the truth!
I am going to miss this series, seriously!
Haha series seriously.
But, I'm going to misss it.
RIP Gee and Ren!
Poor Charlie doesn't have a mum or pops

Chapter 44

Haha, I don't care if you want ot burn off my nasty hands.
That is fucking great!
That is a good Gerard line.
I can actually picture him saying that, o.O
It is too all his fault!
She can't keep saying it isn't his fault!
Everything that happened is all his fault.
It's true!
NOOOOOOOOOOOO,
Mikey can't be dead *chokes up*
Damn you!
You had me going there!
Oh noes!
Here it goes
OH MY GOD!!

Chapter 43

Awwwh, he's trying to calm Mikey down.
Gah! He shouldn't have snapped at her.
It shouldn't matter if she is in the way!!!
So what? Mikey is in pain!!!
No matter what Gee gives him, it wont help.
*gasps* He just called them sluts
He is the slut!!
*shakes head*
He didn't even want to help Mikey at first!
Holy shit, he has hit the fan!
Even after he hit her, she doesn't want to hit him?
I would!
He promises, but it wont happen!

Oh My God.
No Way. It;s Done. My heart was killing me while I was reading this.
The song fit in so well with it. I was literally on the verge of tears.
You are an amzaing writer and these stories [the prequel, the story and the sequel]
were just amazing.
I honestly don't know how you wrote them. Absolutely amazing.
And thank you for the mention in the AN. This story was worth reading from the beginning to the end and I actually recomended a couple fo my friends to read it. I just want to say once again how much I loved it and no words can describe how I felt towards the end of the story.
Brava =]
Much Love Lilly xoxo

*shakes head*
This comment is for Chapter 42 and I loved it.
Though, I can feel for Gee.
He's going through so much.
Yet, he is crazy!
He doesn't want to even see his own brother!
That isn't right!

*shakes head*
This comment is for Chapter 42 and I loved it.
Though, I can feel for Gee.
He's going through so much.
Yet, he is crazy!
He doesn't want to even see his own brother!
That isn't right!

NO NO NO NO NO.
He can't be dead.
No Way.
I Won't belive it.
i don't care what happens to anyone anymore, Gerard HAS to live.
Still on Team Gerard.

omg
NO FUCKING GERARD CAN'T DIE!
he shot himself and not Ren didn't he? or did the cops get him first? omg i am trying my best to hold back tears cause i have school in like ten minutes and i dont want makeup down my face =/
i cried through most of that chapter
when i thought mikey was dead!
when gerard was speaking to ren, it was all so emotional!
omg i am soooo sad now, i want them to be together! GRR!
seriously ive never been so upset with a story =[
I LOVE THIS FUCKING STORY!
can i still say Team Gerard? i don't care im saying it TEAM GERARD!
xx

Hahah the Music made it soo great!~
i was yelling "No!" and everyone in the house looked at me weird and where like "are you okay?"

Atleast now, she might be with Mikey!

And Gerard went out with a Bang!!!

So yeah... since its almost the end i thought i'd write a big long mushy comment.
Though i havent been there since the begin, since i've picked up this story, its been one of the things that kinda brightened my day as lame as that sounds.
'Fail a test , ah well she updated i get to read te next chapter.'
Yeah thats been me for the last few weeks.
And now that its all almost over i just gotta say:
WHAT AM I GONNA DO WITH MY LIFE?

Im kinda kidding kinda serious. I mean i've got other stories i read but some of them just dont cut it.
And yeah... cant wait for the final chapter
I apologive for this long comment

Alright, you win. You got me to cry. That chapter was beyond amazing. It was so darkly romantic. I truly can't wait for what's to come next. Please let Gerard live? It'll break my heart if he doesn't. I want to write so much more, but I'm at a loss of words. It was all so beautiful and intense.

....Shit.
My sound's a little messed up, so I didn't listen to the music.
But damn... I probably would have exploded if I did, for I was already feeling sick to the stomach with the emotions and whatnot towards the end.
I just wanted Gerard Way to kill himself and then Ren and Mikey and the baby live together. They can all cry and shit together. (I definitely felt like a bitch saying that, but OH WELL.)
...You know what else would be a GREAT TWISTING MOTHER FLIPPING ending?
....If EVERYTHING Ren experienced within the last stories were a DREAM.
Like, she woke up and realized that NOTHING like the such has happened.
And then she'd go to school and go to Art class and there, as cool as ever, was her art teacher, Mr. Way.
And then leave the story off to where you don't know if they ever got together, (most likely wouldn't), you don't know anything.
And then walking to school, she sees Donna and Steve in a coffee shop or something and then Mikey taking a morning jog. And maybe even baby Charlie in a woman's stroller.
It'd be like... like the ending of The Wizard of Oz. "And you were there, and you were there, and OH! YOU WERE THERE, TOO!"
[; I know I'm letting my imagination get ahead of me though.

oh wow; that gave me chills.
you're an amazing writer.
i was close to crying, really.

bahhh D':
i'm going to miss this when it's over.
most likely, i'll end up reading again.

Oh.
My.
God.

I cried. I'm not even going to lie. I cried. That was so touching, I feel so bad now. I don't want it to end! This is so damned good to be over! Ohhh no! Gee! Don't go! Ren needs you! Mikey needs you! Charlie needs you!
-Heck I needs you!

Oh lord, that was so awesome, That was such a brilliant chapter, there's no way I could ever make up something like that. Pure genius.

Its so weird when I go back to just look at "Once Upon A Time, Back In Highschool", cause its like... whoa. Everything is sooo different, is so changed, and you would've never expected to be like that.
-Its such a dramatic change, but because your so good at it, its like... it didn't fee like everything was happening too fast.

And if you can do that, then... wow, your amazing.
-Which you already know, so yeah :)

Oh god, its not even the end yet, and I'm already bawling my eyes out! *cough* wuss *cough*
-Your really really REALLY talented,

And you can definitely expect a LONG comment on the last and anymore chapters!

Oh gosh, He doesn't need to go away, He needs to stay, and they live happily ever after, just like Ren wants, and Mikey will run off with some really nice girl and have lots of little Mikey babies.
Ren and Gerard NEED To be together lol.
Team Gerard.

i feel so sorry for Gerard, he really isnt right in the head is he? although he does have his moments!
dont make Gee go away make him stay, with Ren and Charlie
make Mikey get better and find himself a lovely lady who is nothing like Ren and he falls in love with her.
Ren and Gee need each other, they always have and they always will, they are simply meant to be!
Team Gerard!
xx

OMGmonsters?!--x:

Gerard should quit being a dick.
Mikey needs to go to the hopsital..and he won't admit it.
Fuck you Gerard >__>

Team Mikey! <3

I'll drink to that!
:D

“God you’re so fucking stupid,” he muttered, brushing me down.
^ONLY A CRAZY FAG-WHORE WOULD SAY THIS^

"I feel sorry for Gerard, imagine knowing you'd managed to stab your own brother?"
Uhh... Call me heartless, but I don't feel sorry for Gerard AT ALL. He's a fucking pansy ass and he can't think straight for shit.
...Yes, I know I have no heart. STOP LOOKING AT ME LIKE THAT, DAMMIT!