The Porcelain Princess - Comments

  • bee.

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    wow it was beautiful. i love your writing style. i really enjoyed it.
    June 17th, 2009 at 11:30pm
  • justlikeaDREAM

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    This is a lovely story. I love the extended metaphor of the porcelain and pottery. Your language that you use is very beautiful and it flows really well. (:
    May 28th, 2009 at 11:05pm
  • SHYLA01

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    That was a beautiful fairy tale :) and written like a fairy tale should.
    May 28th, 2009 at 08:47am
  • iNerd

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    hm the first chapter is short but oddly attention grabing =]
    very well done so far i cant wait to read more =]
    September 3rd, 2008 at 04:20am
  • wordxrecycler

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    the first chapter was short, but sweet. I liked it a lot.

    Update soon! 8)
    September 2nd, 2008 at 05:46pm