thats a poem but it also has action and characters which make it a narrative, i think the correct term is balad which according to my knowlage in literarture is the mix between lyrical and epic. but in the free land of mibba it can be anything anyway really good, would there be more chapters to it ? that would be interesting, maybe like do something similar to dandes divina comedia and just describe hell, or just the experience of this on character you're starting to develop. or maybe write like the book of poems of hell like some sort of colection of poems and thoughts of persons that are in hell. or do whatever else you want im really hooked up with this whole hell theme. so just write more..
but it also has action and characters which make it a narrative, i think the correct term is balad which according to my knowlage in literarture is the mix between lyrical and epic. but in the free land of mibba it can be anything
anyway really good, would there be more chapters to it ? that would be interesting, maybe like do something similar to dandes divina comedia and just describe hell, or just the experience of this on character you're starting to develop. or maybe write like the book of poems of hell like some sort of colection of poems and thoughts of persons that are in hell. or do whatever else you want im really hooked up with this whole hell theme.
so just write more..