Y'know what? I only came across this story by chance. saw it on the main mibba page, liked the title, and only then did i start reading. But once I had I was compeletely hooked :D I wasn't expecting it to be a Potter story, and even better, it's the marauders- not to mantion a romance. Well, it's personally my idea of fan-fiction heaven. lol. but yeah- I really like the storyline, the whole R Vs S thing and I think you've got the marauders characters spot on as well :D just a couple of points would be that I (personally) don't like those super perfect characters.. Roxie is beautiful, and where you'd think her temper might balance it out, we see alot more of her nice side so it isn't as well balanced. I also, at first reading it, thought the Dumbledore thing was a little unrealistic, but I carried on reading and it didn't seem to be a problem.
Please, please, please write more soon! can't wait to see what happens next!
I wasn't expecting it to be a Potter story, and even better, it's the marauders- not to mantion a romance. Well, it's personally my idea of fan-fiction heaven. lol.
but yeah- I really like the storyline, the whole R Vs S thing and I think you've got the marauders characters spot on as well :D
just a couple of points would be that I (personally) don't like those super perfect characters.. Roxie is beautiful, and where you'd think her temper might balance it out, we see alot more of her nice side so it isn't as well balanced.
I also, at first reading it, thought the Dumbledore thing was a little unrealistic, but I carried on reading and it didn't seem to be a problem.
Please, please, please write more soon! can't wait to see what happens next!
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