The Point Between Life And Death That Connects Us All With A Thread Before Falling Into The Lonely Depths Of Darkness - Comments

okay, i LOVE the story so far, but im only 2 paragraphs in.
my parents are forcing me to go to dinner with them in two minutes.
and i still have to get ready.
anyways, i'll be back soon, and I PROMISE that I will comment
because comments make the world go round!
peace out!

Thanx. It would be better but i couldnt be bothered to edit it.

It is a sign of my past attempts at writing stuff.

lol

Wow Bekki...
I knew you could write amazingly but I didn't know you wrote that kind of thing so amazing.
It's awesome. Really descriptive and all that junk that Miss is always yakking on about in English.