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  • Seance

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    I finally got my computer fixed and was able to finish reading this.

    It was awesome, Rex. Seriously, awesome. That's all I have to say about it. No concrit at all. Just... awesome.
    May 8th, 2009 at 06:36pm
  • beet pharm.

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    This was not three thousand words of nonsense.

    It was amazing. It had me hooked, honestly.

    I reread it twice.

    I still love Frank's reaction to Ande's fangirl moment. It was one of my favorite parts of Eyes of The Devil.

    Good god, woman, you have an unfair way with words. You're amazing.

    The amount of detail, and the imagery...

    you're amazing.
    February 16th, 2009 at 06:21pm
  • beet pharm.

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    I already read this, but I thought I'd reiterate how much I love it.

    It's amazing how parallel it is to Eyes of the Devil, everything fits perfectly.

    I absolutely love it, and your writing style is amazing.

    I still think you should be an author, tbqh.
    January 25th, 2009 at 10:28pm
  • chasingstars;

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    Hey, look, new reader people! I hope yews read Eyes of the Devil first, so you know wtf's going on. ^^*

    And hey, you, author woman. There's still no chapter 11.
    I DEMAND A REASON FOR THIS.
    December 21st, 2008 at 09:15pm
  • Eye Of Truth

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    love it, can't wait for more
    December 14th, 2008 at 10:39pm
  • astoryseldomtold

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    I love this story :)

    It's like so different GO DIFFERENT STORIES :D

    XX
    December 13th, 2008 at 07:28pm
  • chasingstars;

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    Yes, I know. Crapload of comments needed. Getting to it.

    I don't think I need to tell you how amazing and pwnsome this story is because you already know what I think. But I will anyways. The characters are amazing, and Gerard makes me smile. He's one of those characters you can't help but love even though you know they're evil n' stuff.

    Aaaaaande. 8D He's amazing. Poor kid. Does Regret get thrown in the next chapter or are you leaving her and Ande's relationship out of the story? I wasn't sure if you would or not, but I kinda liked the idea that someone down there would help him out.

    For all you hate the description in the story, I think it's wonderful. It's a bit harder to describe stuff in first person instead of third, like EotD, but you pulled it off well. Especially in the difference between smallchild!ande's vocabulary and then after he gets older.

    And Frank! Frank makes me smile. Haven't seen much of Ray yet, but Bob's been really helpful. Mikey needs to calm down- but you know that already. Is there going to be any more of Holly? I assume so, but you never know when you're writing this stuff. :P

    I know I owe you a lot of comments for this since I haven't been on Mibba but I hope you can settle for a long one. I suck at reviewing and this is already stuff I've told you on MSN but hey. Still true.

    And there's still not a chapter ten.
    D:

    ...than?
    December 12th, 2008 at 05:38pm
  • Flu Rescent.

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    It's took me ages to comment this, but I shall now.

    Ande keeps getting thrust from place to place, poor kid. I love everyone's characterizations. I'm actually deciding which one is my favourite, but I do love Death, by a small fraction. XD

    The story plot is different, better, intriguing. I think I've said this before.
    November 30th, 2008 at 12:40am
  • beet pharm.

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    While I admit that it was a little odd...and perhaps a little random, I still loved it. :D

    Poor Ande and his obliviousness to death. XD

    And Bob is amazing. Absolutely amazing.

    And pwnsome. Did I mention amazing?

    Just like this story.

    And I love that you updated. :D Lovelovelovelove.
    November 20th, 2008 at 12:49am
  • beet pharm.

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    This topic has been inactive for more than 30 days. Do not post unless you have something important to add.

    That's when I know I've been neglecting to comment.
    I just saw that.

    And I can't believe I only commented once!

    As I've said multiple times, I love this story with all of my heart and every chapter gets even better. You described the whole weird age-difference thing well, what with him being a teenager in Hell.

    And as I've said before, Gerard is a douchebag.

    :D

    Well, I love it.

    And I'm glad you updated, because I needed something to make me smile today. And it worked.

    thankyou. :D
    November 6th, 2008 at 01:06am
  • beet pharm.

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    This is completrely and totally full of one hundred and seventy six percent of EPIC WIN.

    I mean it.

    Even though I read this a long, long, long time ago, I still love all of it. Ande's so cute as a small child. Haha!

    I love this though. See, it isn't so hard trying to write like a small child, is it? It's actually rather fun. ^_^

    I'm glad to see you finally posted it. That makes me happy. :D
    October 4th, 2008 at 01:59am
  • C V.D P

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    That was a good first chapter.

    I can so see little Ande. <3

    Loved it.
    October 3rd, 2008 at 09:59pm