La da da.. Well, I like it, but I like most of your stuff. I think that it would be something worth continuing, but that is, if you have the motivation and ideas for it. It's hard to go off of just someone wanting you to write something.. Oh well. Too many exclamation and question marks, though. Makes it stand out a bit too much. I don't know, that's about the only thing I noticed. I don't think someone could have that level of curiousity in their voice and still have a yell to it... I still like it, you should really consider continuing it. :]
Well, I like it, but I like most of your stuff.
I think that it would be something worth continuing, but that is, if you have the motivation and ideas for it. It's hard to go off of just someone wanting you to write something..
Oh well. Too many exclamation and question marks, though. Makes it stand out a bit too much. I don't know, that's about the only thing I noticed. I don't think someone could have that level of curiousity in their voice and still have a yell to it...
I still like it, you should really consider continuing it. :]