Shadows of the World - Comments

  • soccerDoRk

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    Astoundingly beautiful. I usually write long reviews, but I feel these two words suit it well. I recommend this story to anyone looking at the comments in debate of whether or not to read this.
    July 10th, 2012 at 08:09am
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    I just read chapter 12. Are you trying to kill me?! Holy mother of gosh. I am in love with Carson Knight. ):
    July 10th, 2012 at 12:42am
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    Oh my god. I thought this had been put up in the time period that I was gone aka a new read for me. Then as I was reading it, I thought 'I've read this somewhere before.' The whole plot vas vaguely familiar. Then I realized I read this back on Quizilla. Holy crap. Anyway, I shall reread it. I remember loving this story so much. It's almost been 4 years since you first posted this!!
    July 10th, 2012 at 12:03am
  • Lifelines

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    I have always been so into your stories. Each one amazes me in different ways. I just can't even explain it. I've been holding out on the last few chapters for about three days because I didn't want it to end. I love how you mixed reality with the magic that your created. It's the perfect combination.

    You are so talented. I hope that you become a published author one day because I want to buy all of your books. You would also be an author I would love to sit down and talk with for hours on how you come up with ideas and what not.

    Anyway, enough of my blabbing. You are an amazing writer and I can't wait for more stories from you that I can spend days reading and not become bored.
    December 22nd, 2010 at 10:59pm
  • yuyuhakusho123

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    unbelievable you wrote one of the most beautiful stories i have ever read
    October 31st, 2010 at 06:44am
  • MyClicheScreenName

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    This was such a beautiful
    Story. I could not stop
    Reading it. I love Carson.
    I want one. Make me one.
    This was so enchanting...
    You are an amazing author.
    July 29th, 2010 at 07:09am
  • still a secret

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    This may sound strange, but I decided to read this when I saw that you deleted QPQ, like I was afraid this might disappear too. I wasn't one of QPQ's many readers, and I'm glad, because I would've just been really sad to see it go.

    I like this story. :) It made me laugh a few times on the first few chapters, and I love this line: "So you want someone to complain to about your boyfriend? I don't know if you've noticed, but I'm not a girl..." :))

    "Why are they getting sick and not you? Why is it them who have to die?" - poor Ant. He must be thinking Clio wants him to die.

    I really liked the idea of the elders. When they started appearing in the story with different parts of the Lady in Blue, it seriously creeped me out!

    I actually really wanted to know who was helping there, or at least to have more clues in knowing who the person was.
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    Who was it?! Haha
    July 12th, 2010 at 04:15am
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    This may sound strange, but I decided to read this when I saw that you deleted QPQ, like I was afraid this might disappear too. I wasn't one of QPQ's many readers, and I'm glad, because I would've just been really sad to see it go.

    I like this story. :) It made me laugh a few times on the first few chapters, and I love this line: "So you want someone to complain to about your boyfriend? I don't know if you've noticed, but I'm not a girl..." :))

    "Why are they getting sick and not you? Why is it them who have to die?" - poor Ant. He must be thinking Clio wants him to die.

    I really liked the idea of the elders. When they started appearing in the story with different parts of the Lady in Blue, it seriously creeped me out!

    I actually really wanted to know who was helping there, or at least to have more clues in knowing who the person was.
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    Who was it?! Haha
    July 12th, 2010 at 04:12am
  • tunnels

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    I just sat down and read this for the afternoon, and it was quite lovely. I like how you have a mixture of fantasy and reality here. The plot was really engaging, and I was honestly worrying about Carson and hoping that he wasn't going to die, as though he was a real person. The element of dreams was super intriguing to me, since I have a bit of a fascination with them as it is.

    Anyway, you're very talented, although I'm sure you know that :)
    July 11th, 2010 at 11:04pm
  • travellingnorth.

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    Hey!
    I just finished all of this, and it was amazing!
    You're a really talented writer and have a way with words.
    I loved the characters, loved to plot line, everything.
    I really loved this story, and I'm so glad I got to read it :)
    June 25th, 2010 at 08:27am
  • Pineapplez

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    I love this! I just finished all of it. :D I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. You write with beautiful style.
    June 10th, 2010 at 02:56pm
  • helloxthere

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    I just read this whole story, it was amazing. Words can't even possibly express how much I loved it. I know I didn't get to comment a lot because I found it after it was already completed, but it was so good. I'm very excited because now I get a chance to read the rest of your stories :)
    April 21st, 2010 at 11:33pm
  • DragonxFox

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    I just read the first three chapters, and I have to say, this story is greatly written.
    April 14th, 2010 at 03:17am
  • astonishing light

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    Oh, I remember reading this/your story back on Quizilla.
    I'm glad I found it/you again.
    Amazing work. :]
    And I'm really looking forward to reading your other stories!
    March 11th, 2010 at 10:43pm
  • Maisweetlove

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    I read it...All of it... :)
    I would say great job or well done, but those are words that can't really express what I'm feeling right now. I like everything about this story. No... I love everything about this story. It's very well written, it's mysterious and I loved the ending, because it wasn't an end to begin with.
    I would have been disappointed if Carson died or if his and Clio's roads drifted apart, and throughout this story I found myself worrying about what could happen and in the end I had nothing to worry about lol. Sometimes fiction can get to you. As if I wasn't reading a story. As if I was living it.

    I've just read something so creative, so mesmerizing that left me with one thought: This should be a movie.
    Absolutely breathtaking. ^^
    February 8th, 2010 at 11:08pm
  • Maisweetlove

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    Oh..oh..my god! I'm at chapter 11 and I have no idea what comes next and I am seriously in love with your story along with a fictional male character, I'm going insane! lol You writing is simply and utterly amazing.
    I'll 'tune in' lol back tomorrow :) Great work!
    February 8th, 2010 at 02:55am
  • Rose1213

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    i loved this story! it was so original.
    im probably going to have nightmares about a creeping lady with red hair but thats okay!
    i thought the whole thing with the flowers at the end was really cool.
    good story!
    January 24th, 2010 at 11:48pm
  • Nereili

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    This was a beautiful story! i couldnt stop reading. I love it! simply beautiful!
    January 4th, 2010 at 11:07am
  • firekite

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    I am in love with your writing. It's so vivid and delicate. I’m jealous.
    December 25th, 2009 at 07:45am
  • two moons.

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    Wow.

    Absolutely breathtaking.
    December 12th, 2009 at 02:39am