In Too Deep - Comments

AWWWW I LOVEEEDDDD THISSSS!!!! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THISSS!! <3 adorable. :)

so since most of these comments were from the spring of '09 I'm assuming that's when it was done. Haha. It's been almost a year so I guess you don't get any more comments on this even if people read it but I WILL comment cause silent readers suck....arse.(:
I'm in love with this story/series whatever. haha. Always loved the whole cliche- and corny- plot of love/hate. But this story is by far probably the best story I've ever read on mibba and probably books. haha. I'm in love with it. It made me tear, it made me want to sceam, squeal, yell, and hug something all the same time.
Dramatic, but I love it. Everything was a good twist, the family problems on both sides, Jackie's sister, their friends. Everything was realistic and Max and Jackie remind me of myself in some characteristics. They're posed and created as normal people would be or are. They're confused, fustrated and have breakdowns- as do I...a bit too often though. //: They love and hate but grow...slowly and eventually.
Gah. I just loved everything. This is definetly my favorite story compared to books and other stories on here. It's just...simply amazing. I'll stop babbling now. (;
Oh, and it's 2:39 AM I spent last night reading Dirty Jounalism. And tonight, this story was my addiction. I refused to go to sleep until I finished this. :D I think I started around six probably. But I had to do other stuff. But for the past consectutive three hours (at least, maybe more.), I've sat on this chair reading this story. But it took me a while. I reread things when I liked them. hah. ;D
But anyway, amazing<3(:
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I wish I found you story a whole lot earlier. xD I've pretty much been reading it for the whole day and I finally finished. The whole story was really great and I'm so glad I found it. It was funny and sad at all the right moments. Awesome job =D

Ah, so what do I say about this story.
Well, I'm definteley gonna say that it better get published one day along with DJ.
Usually, on mibba I don't find stories that I wasnt more out of but now that I won't have Max&Jackie, I'm kinda sad.
I loved how the two grew and developed and yet, stayed the same through the whole story. You did an awesome job at capturing who they were and staying consistant with it. And I love how this time around it was the guy with the broken home instead of the cliche little damsal in distress.
I honestly fell in love with Max&Jackie and I'm glad I stumbled upon DJ while looking for a quick read.
The plot was original and the relationship was realistic.

You're an awesome-mega cool-super star- SHABAMM- uber rockin' writer and if you write something else you soooo better let me know cause I'll be all over it and be spamming you constantly for updates(:

Love.
-Sunni

I absolutely loved both of the Max and Jackie stories!

I can't wait until you write more (even if it's not about them...). Your writing is fantastic. :)

Grrr....it's OVER! lol. i'm kinda late...but i LOVED this story. wished there was some sort of wedding thing! ;]

I read Dirty Journalism and In Too Deep all today!
and might I say, it was fantastic!

I hate Max's parents, and I love him and Jackie.
AHH. IT WAS SIMPLY AMAZINGGG, AND I WISH THERE WERE MORE.

thank youuu for writing such an amazing story (:

i read In Too Deep and Dirty Journalism all in one day!
and let me tell you, you're a fantastic writer.

i would be grinning at their mischeivous antics in one chapter;
and crying at their graudation the next.
i get so emotional, and it's cos' your stories were awesome!!

the epilogue and the chapter before that was so hard to read;
for the simple fact that i didn't want it to end!
when i read the end,
it was like saying Bye to an old friend.
Extremely hard, sad yet oddly feeling peace at the same time.

it was an awsome read.
and thanks so much for writing it.
i can't imagine max and jackie out of high school either;
and maybe ending here was for the best. (:
although i wouldn't mind reading more more more!

<3!

I swear to God, this was one of the most amazing stories ever! I started reading Dirty Journalism on ch. 6 (I don't know how I remember that, I'm a weirod ;P) And I've always thought it was one of the best!

It's over :'(. But I guess a good writer always knows when to stop. Even though a lot of us would appreciate a third part... lol

xo

WOW!!! That was completely amazing!! You should write more, but I respect that you find it hard. If you want to thank someone for recommending your story, it would be claire13138, she has it on her profile under MY RECOMMENDED STORIES. Thanks, I LOVED reading this story, it was great.

OK, so my comp was being stupid and not telling me that there were updates for this story, but since it had been so long I decided to come over anyways. What did I find? two AMAZING updates, finishing the story. I completely love what you did with Jackie and Max at graduation, and the Airport convo with Max and his Mentor. It was all like Je veux Max, and International flightness... ah....

Congrats on a story well done Demetria!

YOU ARE GROUNDED! THIS STORY WASN'T EVER ALLOWED TO END EVER! I AM SERIOUSLY WEEPING TEARS OF ANGER!

But the end was so awwww.. 'P.S. I'm still in love with you'
AW AW AW.
*falls over in tears that the story is over and searches for own Max*

Huh, for some reason, I didn't get a notification that this had been updated. :(

It was an awesome ending, though. I loved it.

Je veux triquel!!!!

is that even what its called??? lol//owell its staying like that!!

but seriously!!!!! TRIQUEL!!!! pwease...^_^

this story is amazing.
i love it.
i wish it didn't end.

You know... There are some things that should never end.

*coughcough*THISSTORY*coughcough*

I'm going to be so sad; I swear. I don't know, but this is probably one of my favorite stories to read on Mibba (if not my absolute favorite). It's just... Well I honestly don't know how to say it, but something about this captured me, and it still has me hooked.

You are a brilliant writer.

ZOMCHLOEG!!!
that was such an AMAZING last chapter!!!!
oh my god, there wasn a single part of it that i didnt completely love!
haha i love how you brought the deflowering thing back :lmfao
amazing amazing amazing!

xx

ZOMCHLOEG!!!
that was such an AMAZING last chapter!!!!
oh my god, there wasn a single part of it that i didnt completely love!
haha i love how you brought the deflowering thing back :lmfao
amazing amazing amazing!

xx

LOVE LOVE LOVE <3