The coin

A girl finds a coin on the way back from her friends house only to later discover the magical power in which it has given her

This is the *first draft* of a short story I am writting for language arts.
but it is only a draft so dont judge it on its word choice and such, judge it on its story line ect.
  1. The Finding Of The Coin
    This is the first paragraph of my short story where the girl first discovers the coin
  2. The Powers Of The Coin
    In this paragraph the girl discovers the powers of the coin through a series of events