The Story of My Chocolate Muffin

Part 3

“… to reveal a beautiful, glowing one dollar bill that she took to school and bought herself a chocolate muffin from the teacher in the grey hallway. THE END!” I quickly said, running out of air by the time I sat down in my seat. A huge grin was plastered onto my face. The teacher looked at me like I was crazy while the students laughed.
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so sorry its only a paragraph but i couldnt help but do that! tell me what you think of my first ever actually finished story!

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK NOW OR ELSE!!!!! *evil laugh evil laugh*