Dreaming of Dreamland

Please read my first attempt at writing a short story and let me know what you think! I do appreciate constructive criticism! It's a little lengthy, but I didn't know how I could separate it into chapters, because it is just a one shot story. Any advice is very welcomed! Thanks a bunch!

Edit note: This was a one-shot, but I broke it down into three parts so it wouldn't look so intimidating. I'm also in the process of editing my spelling errors. Thanks for any more advice you can give me!