Torn

This is just kinda a experimental story.
its my first serious thing I've wrote.

So please, no hate comments.
Comments would be lovely, and any ideas to help improve it would be greatly appreciated(:

15 year old Charlotte Baker has been in Pierre, South Dakota since 6th grade. Almost instantly she becomes best friends with Aiden Mathews, a boy from school.

Now it is Charlotte's sophomore year and things are going good, so it seems. A new guy arrives at Pierre South High named Xadrien, and he's absolutely beautiful. Charlotte knows she can't help but to fall for him.

As soon as Aiden notices she may be interested in Xadrien, he tells her his biggest secret in hope to win her heart, Charlotte soon finds out that Aiden is falling into deep depression, and she may be the only one to save him from drugs, self harm, and himself.