The Dairy of Speaking Rain

This was for an English assignment after we read The Diary of Maddie Spenser - good book. I highly recommend it. Anyways. This is what I wrote for the assignment. I'm debating about continuing it, and filling out the first part. I had originally wanted to write more, but I ran out of time. Plus I could have only written one more entry anyways. We had to write 3-5 entries. Let me know what you think about it, critique what I have, and let me know if you think its worth doing more with it.
Note: I did a lot of research on the Nez Perce before writing this. If you know for a fact I got something wrong, please let me know, and be sure to cite where you got the information that contradicts something I wrote as far as culture, way of life et cetera