Holding Our Breath While We Touch

This is the first story I've ever written, but I've written more since. It is about Pat Kirch and he falls for a girl, Deidee.
Deidee works a normal job at a local cafe, and lives in a regular town. But one summer Pat Kirch comes in. They fall for each other right away. And they don't resist.
Pat and Deidee become closer and closer. She meets the band. Soon, they become official.
But it was one night at one of Tim's parties that things went astray from Deidee and Pat's fairytale love story.