Health 2 Papers

Madison you have great writing ability, you have an excellent way of telling a story and making it feel real to the reader. Two things you can work on to improve your grade in this class. First always proof read your paper to look for mistakes or changes. Second I would like to hear more about the physical ailments that are happening to your body next paper, for example: depression, teeth rotting, throat pain, lose of weight and so on.

In all this was a good paper, final grade: B