Losing Grace

this is my entry for a a contest I entered called 'a picture is worth one song' The picture above was the picture I got and the song i received was called 'unexpected places' by 'the academy is....'
I found it Extremley hard to come up with a story with the picture so please be nice :)
I tried my best to create a story with both song and picture so hopefully it is ok. Please leave a comment with what you think about it. constructive cristism is appreciated or ways I could improve would massivley help. I checked my grammar and punctuation with my english teacher and she says it good so yeah :)

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