Caleb

Okay. This is a rough. I don't know how I'm going to go with this. But it's something I aim to get finished. It's set in a modern day small town by the name of Crimson Creek. Caleb isn't the name of the story. Just the name of the main character as I have not come up with a name for the story.
Anyway, if you read this comments and criticism are always very much appreciated.
Anyway, tell me what you think.