Janice No More
DISCLAIMER! MUST READ!
*Disclaimer*
I got the idea of the Kareptons and how they are killed by this anime TV show called Blood Plus. I do not want to seem like I am plangerizing, so I'm just telling the truth. I really liked the idea and it stuck with me.
Also, I am in need of very descriptive comments of what you think of the story. BECAUSE I am re-writing it with a few new scenes in it. There is just this thing about some parts of the story I don't like. Like it needs more! I don't want to turn it in next voting cycle and not notice that, so PLEASE HELP ME OUT GUYS! Comment about everything wrong and right, spelling, grammer, ANYTHING!
Please help me out, guys.
Thank you!
Ally~*
ALSO I am rewriting the book, BUT I will still add more writing. Once I finish the editing I will replace this version with the revised one.
Thank you!
I got the idea of the Kareptons and how they are killed by this anime TV show called Blood Plus. I do not want to seem like I am plangerizing, so I'm just telling the truth. I really liked the idea and it stuck with me.
Also, I am in need of very descriptive comments of what you think of the story. BECAUSE I am re-writing it with a few new scenes in it. There is just this thing about some parts of the story I don't like. Like it needs more! I don't want to turn it in next voting cycle and not notice that, so PLEASE HELP ME OUT GUYS! Comment about everything wrong and right, spelling, grammer, ANYTHING!
Please help me out, guys.
Thank you!
Ally~*
ALSO I am rewriting the book, BUT I will still add more writing. Once I finish the editing I will replace this version with the revised one.
Thank you!
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Please criticize it thouroughly and honestly!