All I Want

Claire is a foster child and has been for her whole life. At the age of 14 she is sent to live with the Sayyah's, a rich family consisting of Janae (the mom), Scott (dad), and five boys (Seph- 16, Colin and Dylan- 17, Christopher- 20, and Devin- 23). Weird things start to occur. The adults are being oddly nice to her, Seph keeps dropping hints about how long they've been waiting to see her again, and then there's the dizzy spells...
***I know this sounds like begging, but for every time you review/ comment on my work, I promise to do the same for you. If all I get is a one or two word review/ comment, I will review/ comment on your work, just don't expect anything in-depth. It's like the golden rule: “Treat others the way you want to be treated” except for writing, and that rule is: “Review others the way you want to be reviewed, honestly.” Just keep in mind that if you leave 7 comments (no more than one for every chapter) I will give you 7 comments in return. I will be doing this for all of my projects :D This offer starts on Thursday July 8, 2009. Thanks***