Another Fantasy Story

Hi everyone!
I began to write a couple months ago, this is my first story and also the first
time I posted something.
Pls let me know what you think about it! I'm not sure if the story is well written
or not. Don't expect too much. This is only the intro to the real story. Because
I'm still not so sure about my writing skills.

I hope you'll enjoy the intro,
and pls let me know what you think of it.. If you'll like it, I'll post the rest of my story.

Love,
Tess