Blood thirsty.

Hanging around with the wrong crowd, mothers allways tell you to stick with the trusting friends.
"Dont hang out with the wrong crowd, you'll never know what kind of trouble they could get you in."
It could even, just maybe,
be the end.

This was an english assignment, we had to write a horror story. I just wanna know what you guys think of it, any good?
Please give it a chance.
xo V