The Years That Are No More

This is something I wrote for Language Arts. I had to write a short story and it pretty much just started with me realizing that I didn't use very much imagery in my writing, so I wanted to see if I could. This is what came out. It's not terrible, but not one of my better ones. However, if you guys like it enough, I do know that I could continue it if I wanted to. So yeah, just give me feedback, I'll take constructive criticism too.