Two Minutes Can Be a Very Long Time When You're Waiting...
My English coursework. I don't really know if I'm actually allowed to do this, so I'll just do it anyway because that's the kind of girl that I am. -starts singing Fall Out Boy-
Ahem, anyways. We were told to write a piece of orinial, creative, descriptive writing that could take place within two minutes. Thus the need for thoughts, description and a vivid imagination. I'm hoping this will get me on the road to that A I'm predicted. -scoffs-
Kind of autobiographical, to the extent that it's going on about my characters life and thoughts and (on occasions) feelings. He's a very shallow person. It's cynical and ironic, basically how most of my writing is.
Please tell me what you think and what I could improve. I only wrote it in like an hour. Feedback? Thou shall have cookies? Good little spawns.
NOTE: Based on Frankie Willis and my friend Nathan. But other than that, completely original. Is that allowed? :S
Ahem, anyways. We were told to write a piece of orinial, creative, descriptive writing that could take place within two minutes. Thus the need for thoughts, description and a vivid imagination. I'm hoping this will get me on the road to that A I'm predicted. -scoffs-
Kind of autobiographical, to the extent that it's going on about my characters life and thoughts and (on occasions) feelings. He's a very shallow person. It's cynical and ironic, basically how most of my writing is.
Please tell me what you think and what I could improve. I only wrote it in like an hour. Feedback? Thou shall have cookies? Good little spawns.
NOTE: Based on Frankie Willis and my friend Nathan. But other than that, completely original. Is that allowed? :S
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When Really It's Closer Than It Is Too Far
Randomly titled chapter. The story is titled okay. There will be no more chapters.