Eye of the Gorgon

Basically, a girl is taken into an alternate universe in which she discovers she's the rightful Queen. Also there's a whole Romeo-Juliet esque factor because she falls for someone she can't be with, and yeah... that's it. Its pretty intense. I started it 6 years ago, thought I'd post it now and continue it. My writing has gotten a lot better, so sorry if the first part sounds horrible. Comments are greatly appreciated.