Lonely

A girl, living her routine, comes to school one day and finds something to be different. Too different.

This was a shortstory written for an English task. The task was to write about someone being lonely.

I'd love constructive critism. My teacher gave me an A on this, and corrected a few words, but we all know teachers can be dumb as hell, so if there's something wrong with this, please tell me?

This is a two-shot.