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On the Surface I Have the Perfect Life, But My Life Isn't Surfacing

Somethings in life, Just aren't fair. For CJ, this could be her motto, but when her family drops a bombshell can she find solace in the men that are about to change her life.
  1. There's something about this salmon (1)
    First one
  2. What a b-witch (2)
    2nd chapter, posted this fine eveing/night
  3. Whispering is rude, unless you're at your in laws (3)
    3rd chapter !
  4. Gravy stains can just be a b-witch (4)
    4th chapter (Bit short)
  5. Remind me never to work for megan (5)
    5th chapter, Last update of the day
  6. CJrawr Has just updated her twitter for the 599th time (6)
    6th chapter
  7. Whoa and I thought Marcus was Hawtt (7)
  8. It helps that I adore you (8)
    ** okay so This contains a few naughty words, the first part between the **, means it's a deam and most stuff would make sense in italics (As it's CJ's thoughts) this is the case for a few previous chapters. Feel free to add Italics where you wish i
  9. I'm not sure that this situation, could be any more akward(9)
    It's a short one, just a filler.
  10. So this is what has become (10)
    So it's short, but I'm starting to feel a little bit sad that I've no feedback.
  11. Here's your reciept (11)
    Probably the last update before the 25th, but I could be persuaded otherwise.
  12. The perfect meal home (12)
    This is getting more and more difficult to post
  13. De rien (13)
  14. Those four words can be such a turn off (14)
    One away from 15, I like this one.
  15. If I hadn't... (15)
    haven't updated in a while so i thought if ANYONES READING THIS IS FOR YOU
  16. just wake up (16)
    I'm a little sad, no feedback, its upsetting.
  17. Its got to get worse before it gets better(17)
  18. What can I do ?(18)
  19. Mr and Mrs (19)
  20. I can't control this feeling(20)
    Its a bit short, i know.
  21. Oh la laa(21)
    I think this is my favourite chapter so far.
  22. Well, I tried to keep you my dirty little secret(22)
    Please please please can I have some feedback! For christmas.....
  23. This is my problem(23)
  24. The grass is always greener on the other side, or so it seems. .(24)
  25. Another excuse for a party, wonderful.(25)
  26. Drunken words speak sober minds.(26)
  27. Tis the season to forget absolutley everything(27)
    2 MORE COMMENTS= 2 MORE UPDATES!!(EVERYBODY WINS!) -
  28. Please not another plateful(28)
    so hopefully there will be another up today, anyway its only short,. sorry! but still-enjoy:)
  29. Disaster(29)
    DRAMA.DRAMA.DRAMA.
  30. why oh why. (30)
  31. Dont remind me-oh please dont remind me(31)
    Thankyou all for the feedback, really glad you're enjpying! just keep commenting and enjoying the stories and ill keep updating !
  32. Im skin and bones(32)
    Personally my favourite chapter, hope you all enjoy it:)
  33. I searched for gold(33)
    More heartache for CJ. drop me a comment if you liked it:)
  34. Smile at people, it'll confuse them(34)
    Thankyou for all the people commenting and enjoying my story-keep on giving feedback it really encourages updates;)
  35. This dress, the next dress, any dress will do.(35)
    I like this one, it will be the shopper in me:) enjoy&comment pleaase
  36. I want taco's(36)
    Comments and feedback please and maybe suggest my story to a few people if you enjoyed it!
  37. Now i know how people in love feel(37)
    Number 37 for you guys, i kinda forgot i had it on my lappy as im such a klutz:L aahah anyway a special thanks to all my readers and commenters(you are brilliant) and a big thankyou to: lightinyoureyes, rivals are insane and akanevampire19. who have
  38. Are you having trouble, finding sleep at night(38)
    mixin' it up a bit:L
  39. you’re a saint, you’re a queen.(39)
    hope you like 39, im looking to read a ne wlong story. i like fan fics:L ahah anyway remember to tell me if you like my story and tell your friends about my story(could i sound any cheesier, im like a pizza)
  40. I was likeeeeeee( 40)
    another iddy biddy update, leave me a comment, i wont bite!:)
  41. No switching on the luck.(41)
    wowwowowowo big 41:L ahaha i know people are probably thinking I should wrapp this story up soon, but Im in love with writing it at the moment!:) so no worries about it finishing yet!:) anyway enjoy reading it, i enjoyed writing this one!xo
  42. When I grow up, I want to eat cake- and lots of it(42)
    so so so 43, I hope you enjoy this one. dont worry there will be drama and romance soon, so keep reading for that! Im really happy with the responses Ive been getting, yess readers you all are wonderfull! anyway enjoy xo
  43. I know whens 3's a crowd. Do you?(43)
    i am so sorry, im having frequent problems with the internet so i cant update:L Im posting another NOW!
  44. One drink, Two Drink. Three drink. Floor.(44)
    The second one, you can tell i feel bad:)
  45. I left my heart in tokyo(45)
    heyheyhey beautiful readers, enjoy number 45:)
  46. She has eyes that could light up this whole town(46)
  47. Don't worry I need more than 140 characters(47)
  48. Seasons change, but people don't(48)
  49. You're more than scaley(49)
  50. She's a devil in a blue dress(50)
  51. The queenof deciet and the kind of lies (51)
    This ones Marcus's POV.
  52. Oh go cry me a river, Lady(52)
  53. My apologies, Im sure their all you have from me (53)
  54. I'm the ninja of the heart(54)
    whay new chapter! I want some more feedback please, let me know if you like/hate/love it:) also give my other story a read, if its your kind of thing:)
  55. I love the way you do that(55)
    i love this story but its so difficult to write considering my luck with love:L anayway i'll get on with it, you looking forward to the wedding?
  56. Jelloooooo(56)
    i updated because i got a lovely message ( i would have a big cookie but im on a diet:/) hope you like it!
  57. I'm so running out of titles, but this is a good one(57)
    like the name?:P enjoy the update, the end is near:(
  58. I dont plant the seed in your head (57)
    almost done now, but keep reading, i dont know whether to do a sequel? should i?
  59. Forever and day or day to me (58)
    I couldnt face ending this story yet! if i still have readers comment! i want your feedback! i will be updating tomorrow i just need loads of ideas. what do you want????? thankyou guys are awesome!