Guy With a Tattooed Neck

Okay. So basically we are being forced into studying Girl With A Pearl Earing in english and I found it so horribly boring that I though, hey! I could write better than this.
So then I thought, well, how could I make this more interesting:
1)Make it MCR
2)Make it Ferard
3)Make it modern
and presto, here it is.
This is only a short little intro to the story to see if people will actually want to read it so I will only continue if I get subscribers and comments that make my ego grow to dangerous levels lol.
Oh, and yeah, the ending of this story wont be the same as GWPE because I though it was crap.

Gerard:
*Rich
*Married to Lyn-Z
*Painter
*24
*No kids (unlike in the GWPE)

Frankie:
*Poor
*Gardener/workman
*17
*Orphan
  1. Strangers
    He looked so out of place....
  2. She hates it....
    continued first chapter.
  3. Black And White Pebbles
    Frankie journies to his new life.
  4. Szabo
    Frank gets the grand tour....
  5. Understanding
    Frank gains some knowledge, and gets confused too.
  6. The Garden Design
    Gerard explains to Frank his ideas.
  7. Feelings Of Loss
    Frank loses something close to him, and Gerards being weird.
  8. Hair.
    So close. yet so far.
  9. Moth Balls
    Gerard and Frank clean out the spare room.
  10. Problematic
    Frank gets a .... problem ....
  11. Intersections
    Gerard's moment of truth.
  12. Search Lights
    Time for a re-evaluation.
  13. My Horizon
    Franks Finale