A Far Cry from Innocence

She's has been kidnapped, and brought to this mysterious mansion that sits atop a citadel, and looks down on the City of Evil. The five men that rule it are ruthless creatures and have kept her as a slave. She's had enough and she wishes to escape. She finds herself sitting on a rooftop, gazing into the shining city made of gold, but she is caught between a gun and the ground as someone wants to play a game, and settle her life with a click of a revolver.

One Shot I'm doing for English class.=D I just thought id sneak the guys in there.
I really would appreciate comments on this cause i don't know if its just right. Also i just half assed the title, so if you can come up with a better one, tell me!

Dont own characters. Dont steal my plot...yeah