Status: in progress :)
All I Feared
Sarah: her best friend.
Steve: a shoulder to cry on.
David: the one and only love.
What happens when you discover an awful truth about the only person you ever loved?
Kelly fell in love with David when she was just nineteen; but when she discovers a terrible secret about his past, however hard she tries to forgive and forget, she knows she is making a huge mistake in staying with him. And David can’t help but keep reminding her.
In the end, it is only her she cannot forgive for keeping him in their lives . But she still can’t help loving him.
It is a merciless love story just begging to be told.
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Our english homework is to write the first chapter of a novel. I need to know whether to keep it as it is, or completely re-write the plot, please comment, I would really appreciate it!!
Steve: a shoulder to cry on.
David: the one and only love.
What happens when you discover an awful truth about the only person you ever loved?
Kelly fell in love with David when she was just nineteen; but when she discovers a terrible secret about his past, however hard she tries to forgive and forget, she knows she is making a huge mistake in staying with him. And David can’t help but keep reminding her.
In the end, it is only her she cannot forgive for keeping him in their lives . But she still can’t help loving him.
It is a merciless love story just begging to be told.
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Our english homework is to write the first chapter of a novel. I need to know whether to keep it as it is, or completely re-write the plot, please comment, I would really appreciate it!!