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This is not a new story. This is simply a short prologue I put together for a bigger bit of writing that I don't plan on posting here because, well, it's pretty hardcore and I don't want any jackers out there.

I posted this solely to get your honest opinion because I really need it.

So tell me what you think!
If you like it, I may even post bits and pieces of it sporadically. Kind of like a series of short stories.