How to Save a Life While Messing With Fate...

I had two new story ideas and instead of having three stories to do I mixed the two new ideas together. I will continue my other story. Please tell me what you think about this new story!
The story is about Nick Jonas who is about 25 and is going through a terible time in his life. He thinks he has no way out and is starting to think about suicide. The other main character is Staci (me again) and she has visions; visions of her loved one's deaths. It is a horrible thing for her, she is 24 and has had the visions since she was 16. She doesn't think she can take it anymore, it's just too painful and heartbreaking.