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Allondite

chapter I the moon palace,

Part I the complacent princess

A song plays faintly in the background, as a woman fastens her gloves tightly, she then pulls her ribbon tight and lets the cloth fall down gently, she then gazes upon herself, her eyes soften and her face rounds, "how many years has it been now?" she mutters, her eyes look as though they are deep pools of water, she slowly turns her jaw bone toward the mirror, "I wonder...." she gets up slowly and begins to walk, her dress trails behind her, her hands grasp the double doors, and she swiftly swings them open, as to make her long dark blond hair flail behind her, she looks upon the scenery, a lavish party...in a great room big enough for royalty, the wood of the room full of light, the only shadow, are of those attending,

A guy puts his hand through his reddish blond hair, as his eyes gaze through the scenery, slowly his eyes fixate on the woman his brown eyebrows soften; as he raises his slender body from his seat, his noble white shoes slowly walk across the checked floor, as he stands in front of her a concerned look stretches across his face, "sis?" he then wears a half smile on his face,

Her face blooms like a flower, "Brother! How are you!?" she then closes her eyes slightly and shakes her head in happiness "and how were the past two years while you were away from me?" she then tilts her head ;as she looks at him; slightly, she then giggles slightly "Finally you're back!!" she hugs him suddenly, and her hands tighten around his back, his face softens and he gives into the hug as well, "I missed you so much little brother" she then pulls away with an irritated look on her face after a loud noise interrupts them, "Let us go be private from the party" she says with disappointment, the woman slowly walks through the double doors and the boy closes them behind them, "so How'd school go?" she places her hand on her azure gold dress waist,

He looks down, "well I graduated top of my class" he touches his shirt "this is actually my best robe..." he blinks for a second "but I have a secret...I've received a special divine gift for my progress and my studies"

She blinks with curiosity "a gift? I wanna see!" she says in complete distress of curiosity,

he smiles "all right then" he then lifts his hand so it bisects his body and he slowly closes his eyes completely, A pure white light grows in the palm of his hand, and swirls and overflows into a ball of pure energy,

Her Eyes grow big "Wo-W what is that!?" she says in confusion and awe

His eyes open with peace "this is...the purifying light of holy," he says with wisdom and peace

Her confusion intensifies with skepticism "Holy?" she gasps in awe, "How’d you obtain this?"

he almost ignores her having to complete the spell,” Now this room is purified by the ultimate divine light, " the lights swiftly shoots across the room and dissipates into contrasting beams of light that eventually engulf the room in white,

Her curiosity now peaked as she raises her hand to her face "so brother....what do you do with that?" she asks almost worrying

He smiles out of the side of his mouth, "I'm an....Exorcist Slash...ghost helper" he says with a content feeling of holy within his cause

She looks at him with stale eyes, "Really? An exorcist? How cheesy brother" she says in a humorous disapproval, "Although...you always have been a bible thump-er and religious person in any religion you enter," she thinks for a second feeling lost "OH! I almost forgot! I need to get back to the party!!" she says in haste and fear "what would the party be without Princess Courtnie Maree Raybrant" she says almost posing like a hero then giggling slightly, "Gotta go!" she kisses Relm on the cheek and begins toward the doors,

Relm looks down in self pity "I'll go to the roof then" he says reluctantly,

Courtnie waves at him while opening the doors "Okay that's fine brother!" she says as the doors shut in haste,

He then begins out the back of her room and toward the roof, he walks up the roof staircase by staircase feeling as if he's climbing to the stars, this begins to cheer him up slightly like he’s climbing to astrology's greatest mysteries, he feels lost in his own dream world, as he opens the door labeled "roof", "hmm" he hums as his dream is broken by a mysterious feeling, "who's there?" He asks in a quiet strict voice,

"So you noticed...." A dark figure says in the shadows quietly, Relm walks closer noticing the figure is sitting off the edge of the building, "How'd you sense me being here?" The unknown figure asks,

The boy quietly walks next to the dark haired boy "training” as the blond boy sits ever so quietly,

The dark hair boy looks at him a bit weird-ed out "What type of Training?" he says in confusion,

The blond boy wears a smile and rolls his eyes slightly, "nothing, hey what's your name?" the blond boy asks inquisitively in comfort,

The dark haired boy's eyes narrow "Doran...Now tell me training?" he says in frustration,

Relm squints with a smile really big "My names Relm!!" he then begins in a chuckle,

Doran gets surprised "Relm!? You mean Prince Relm Regan Raybrant whom renounced his throne to study at a monastery close to the Vatican from personal choice?" Doran's face still shocked,

Relm looks down in sadness "Yeah...why does everyone always say that?" Relm's eyes look into the street below, as Doran looks away feeling bad, then his eyes roam up Doran’s shoes to his black skinny jeans, and to his tight shirt , Relm notices not only the cute freckles that Doran has but he's wearing three layers of shirt, Relm quickly moves his eyes to wear Doran’s eyes would meet his in conversation, "I mean...you'd think...they'd just forget about me, and leave me alone" Relm sighs slightly "but no, all they do is intrude upon my life,"

Doran's eyes seem sad for Relm "I'm sorry” Doran says in pity,” I d-didn't mean to bring up..."

Relm rolls his eyes as Doran doesn't see the point of his conversation at all, and smiles "You don't have to feel bad; I was just stating an obvious fact about the media around me..." Relm begins in a whisper, "They're all stupid" he says as he chuckles" he begins in a blush as he has to turn away,

Doran begins to concentrate in a beautiful resplendence suspended in time, the personification of reminiscence "I wonder how we could get to such a perfect spot?" Doran says in lost reminisce,

Doran looks up at him as he blushes "what do you mean?" his eyes fixate on just Doran, as he looks at Doran innocently,

Doran smiles faintly "You know...being able to see all these stars, having a great moon to gaze at and a sun that even keeps up warm at night, and all the lights below even human made still...quite beautiful," he says now seeming nostalgic,

Relm squints and smiles..."Doran...that was absolutely beautiful, "awe strikes Relm’s heart as he blushes more

Doran looks at Relm with a gleam in his eyes "...Beautiful...?” he chuckles "you're cute" Doran says with a smile,

Relm's eyes look up at Doran really big like he's trying to keep the cuteness "what do you mean exactly me...being cute?" Relm says shyly still blushing,

Doran looks to the sky "people...people like you are rare Relm.” Doran says as he closes his eyes tightly,

Relm looks down, "Is...That a good thing...to you?" Relm says tilting his head with self conscience,

Doran smiles and turns toward Relm fully, "Of course...It's a great quality!” Relm's eyes light up, "For a friend" Doran says with disassociation,

Relm looks down, "A friend" he thinks, "that is what I always am..." he continues to look down at the street below letting it settle in his head as the way things are,

"Hey Relm? Is she from the party?" Doran says with curiosity out of Relm’s sight,

"A girl?" Relm thinks..."better look to see who he's gonna be with..." Relm looks up to where Doran’s looking hoping it's Courtnie, "she'd never like Doran" then he realizes the woman's face... "She's A…” He mutters with fear "definitely" he gets up and turns toward her, Doran watching in confusion, still sitting, "Who are you?" the woman turns her face toward them, her skin snow white, almost luminescent her blue eyes sparkle like a aquamarine, and a large red jewel sparkles like a crown upon her head, her reddish gold hair flutters behind her like a willow tree in the wind, she mutters not a word but opens her mouth as if trying to say something, as her princess like gold azure dress hovers over the ground, her golden shoes scrape across the ground, Relm puts his hand up, Palm toward her, "She's a ...FOR SURE!" Relm closes his eyes "I call upon the divine power of holy, let ye guide me and vanquish all evil here, blessed be" Relm's hand projects a beam of light from it, it grows as his eyes darken, his eyes fade as he forces the light from his body, toward the woman, his body goes limp before he can see the light pass through her and only ripple through her, seeming to have no effect but a ripple that flows across her, like water she opens her eyes after having them closed and vanishes like thin air, Doran thinks in astonishment as he realizes Relm fell into his lap, he grasps onto Relm so he doesn't fall from the building,
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this is pretty good for a second draft of the first part it's only 5 pages atm but it needs to be ten I'll get it there soon :) thought later I have one that is 36 pages, maybe I just need to balance it out, will get there after I get the first chapter down