A Grave Tale

This came to me when I was going for a stroll in a cemetery. We had a writing prompt, and I created a rough draft of this monstrosity. It oddly stuck to me, scared me, and fascinated me.

Please leave a comment. It will help my writing. Tell me what's wrong, and I'll see what I can do. Tell me what's right, and I'll have more confidence in my abilities (or lack of).

Warning - This may disappoint a few optimists.