Tell Me a Story

Our narrator, a man of unknown name or origin, pulls a suspected criminal into an alleyway and asks him to accept redemption from his sins by telling his story.

This tale is a piece I have worked on over and over again since I was sixteen, rewiting it through the years. Any helpful critisizm is very much appreciated. I still plan on aking a few changes, as it resembles the a part in a famous book that it was inspired by.

Although it is not graphic in nature, it suggests vey graphic themes. Someone once told me, upon reading it, that they could no longer look at me the same way. I am not too sure if that was good or bad, though.