The Park

I was in worship practice at my church, when i wrote this. They were doing a guitar workshop, but I don't play, so I was bored. I worked on it and gave the final version. They had read it a little but while I was reading so my friend told me to put it on here. That about it.
Please comment!!!!! I would love to know your thoughts about it weither they be bad, sad or awsome!!! :-D Enjoy.