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Astonished Heart

Shame hit him on the last day of senior year, college was next and he was still a Immature child. He only un-locked his heart once to a girl name Jizabella. Then there love collided with the distinction of his parents. The cold brisk air always clogged his choice of words when he spoke to a decent looking girl but never did he imagine dating them. His uncle was right it’s time to find the perfect girl. After college it’s the real word that comes next. The only college that accepted him was Bemidji State University. He wanted a head start so he was packed to leave on the day he was assigned a room. He walks on the campus and stops in his steps. Breathless Saden caught a glimpse of a indescribable angel name Elizabeth Taylor .
  1. The Prologue
  2. First Day
    I switched it to 1st person .
  3. Nice Meeting You