Falling in Love for Real

So second one. Tell me what y'all think. Let me know if I should continue.
Anyway where we left off

Katherine: Hey look! They're coming here in a couple months.

Hailey: That means we have to beg our parents and raise the money to buy the tickets. I hope they'll let us go

Katherine: Me too. I can drive. We both have our permits. If you really look at it two permits equal one liscense.

Hailey: Haha I highly doubt it Katherine. But we can try.

Katherine: Lets go ask my mom

:Katherine and Hailey run downstairs:

Katherine: Hey mom

Katherines mom: Yes honey

Katherine: Is it okay if me and Hailey go to an allstar weekend concert coming up in a couple months?

Katherines mom: Ummm I don't know. Let me talk to your dad. Hailey, have you asked your parents??

Hailey: No ma'am. But I plan to when I get home

Katherines mom: And how do you plan to get the tickets??

Katherine: Well me and Hailey were planning on doing random odd jobs around town until we get enough money to pay for our tickets. Or you can give us the money*smiles*

Katherines mom: Good try. I like plan number one. Well Katherine dinners almost ready why don't you take my car and drive Hailey home real quick

Katherine: Yes ma'am

:With Hailey and Katherine in the car:

Katherine: Well that went better then what I planned it to.

Hailey: I know right. Let's jam to allstar weekend

Katherine: Okay!!!

:When Hailey and Katherine get to haileys house:

Okay I'm going to stop here. I'm doing these on my iPod so I'm sorry if I take forever to update. Let me know what y'all think please(: