Depression

This is my first actual story on here and I'm really proud of it. :) This is a fanfiction, Avenged Sevenfold fanfiction actually. It's a Macky or Zatt whichever you think the pairing of M. Shadows and Zacky Vengeance is called lol. You really don't know it's them until the end but I'd figured I'd tell you :) Criticism is really appreciated since this is my first story and I wrote this in my English class and they liked it. This is slash also though I think you got that already lol. Tell me what you liked and didn't like or what I could've done better :)