I Keep the Faith

I read on the KTF thread that we are allowed to repost our Keep the Faith submissions and made this. I started this story in order to receive comments and hopefully, constructive criticism. I am in no way trying to make my submissions stand out -- I merely want your thoughts on them. You can view the entire collection of KTF entries here. So many people poured blood, sweat and tears into that thing; I suggest you read all of it.

Enjoy. Comments would be much appreciated.