One Foot in the Grave

If any of you are still interested in a story like this I would like to inform you that I've taken this idea a redid it in a way I find to be more interesting. I feel like I got lost in this story in a bad way and I was not able to stay true to how I wanted to represent the characters.

I have a lot of ideas for the new version of this and I plan to see it through to the end. So many things have changed but the basic story of it is the same. I would love if you all would check it out and let me know what you think, it's called "The Cost of Freedom"

Here is the link to the story: The Cost of Freedom

Here is the trailer I made for it: Story trailer

Thanks and hope to hear from you all!
Jamie Jo