Sweet Dreams

We had to write short stories for school.
So I did this.
I dunno how great it is, but hey.
It's only the first draft so far, so comments and crit would be amazing.

Based off Quinn Allman and Frank Iero. But names were changed because it was school, where reality doesn't exist. :D

Edit: May 28, 2008. I updated the story with the final draft , and it completely changed the direction of the story. So if you've read it before , read it again , because it's a lot different , I think.