Status: I don't have much time on my hands. You get it as it comes.
An Introspective Connection
Chapter Three
"So, do you wanna do something fun?" he asked me. I blushed as I thought about what he could mean by that. Then I mentally smacked myself for even thinking such things. Surely he doesn't like me like that. Heck, I don't even think he likes boys....
"Uh... sure...." I mumbled. God, I'm such a pansy. Why did I have to be born so shy and reserved? To my surprise, he giggled at me. I blushed, then gave him a look that was like, 'what was so funny?'. Then he shook his head. "Oh, it's nothing. You just seem so shy and reserved. I think it's kind of... cute...." Now it's his turn to blush. He thinks I'm cute? Does he not notice how much more brilliant he is than me? I mean, really. If I could be as beautiful as him, I'd look down on everyone.
Well, maybe not. I'm not the type to judge. I'm the little fag, I have no right to talk....
"So, for the fun," he started. Then he looked me over. "Say, Tommy..." My heart skipped a little when he said my name. I'm such a girl.... "Tommy, do you like Queen?" "Oh my goodness! Yes, I love Queen! But, why do you ask?" He flashed me that beautiful smile of his, then took my hand. I looked at him, but he was already pulling me out the door.
"You'll see here in a second. Don't worry your pretty little head." Gosh, I wish I could be more like Adam. He's so outgoing, so nice, so... Completely & totally opposite from how I am. I'm just that weirdo kid who's been keeping to himself since getting called "fag" and "queer" everyday by a bunch of jerks.
"Mom? Liz? Do you care if me and Tommy go out to Wal-Mart for a bit? I promise we won't get lost or kidnapped or anything..." His mom turned to my mom, and they nodded as if a certain agreement just passed through the two of them. Then they turned to us and nodded. "Yea, it's alright. Just be back before 8, okay?" I looked at my watch, and saw it was only six. We had plenty of time to do whatever 'fun' Adam was talking about. At least, I HOPE two hours is enough time....
Adam smiled at our parents, then at me. His grip on my hand tightened, and he pulled me out the door. Mom noticed we were holding hands, and shot me a quick smile. I blushed, and followed him out.
"So... Wal-Mart's the place we're having our "fun"?" I asked. "I guess you'll just have to find out, huh?" he replied.
What exactly does he have planned...?
"Uh... sure...." I mumbled. God, I'm such a pansy. Why did I have to be born so shy and reserved? To my surprise, he giggled at me. I blushed, then gave him a look that was like, 'what was so funny?'. Then he shook his head. "Oh, it's nothing. You just seem so shy and reserved. I think it's kind of... cute...." Now it's his turn to blush. He thinks I'm cute? Does he not notice how much more brilliant he is than me? I mean, really. If I could be as beautiful as him, I'd look down on everyone.
Well, maybe not. I'm not the type to judge. I'm the little fag, I have no right to talk....
"So, for the fun," he started. Then he looked me over. "Say, Tommy..." My heart skipped a little when he said my name. I'm such a girl.... "Tommy, do you like Queen?" "Oh my goodness! Yes, I love Queen! But, why do you ask?" He flashed me that beautiful smile of his, then took my hand. I looked at him, but he was already pulling me out the door.
"You'll see here in a second. Don't worry your pretty little head." Gosh, I wish I could be more like Adam. He's so outgoing, so nice, so... Completely & totally opposite from how I am. I'm just that weirdo kid who's been keeping to himself since getting called "fag" and "queer" everyday by a bunch of jerks.
"Mom? Liz? Do you care if me and Tommy go out to Wal-Mart for a bit? I promise we won't get lost or kidnapped or anything..." His mom turned to my mom, and they nodded as if a certain agreement just passed through the two of them. Then they turned to us and nodded. "Yea, it's alright. Just be back before 8, okay?" I looked at my watch, and saw it was only six. We had plenty of time to do whatever 'fun' Adam was talking about. At least, I HOPE two hours is enough time....
Adam smiled at our parents, then at me. His grip on my hand tightened, and he pulled me out the door. Mom noticed we were holding hands, and shot me a quick smile. I blushed, and followed him out.
"So... Wal-Mart's the place we're having our "fun"?" I asked. "I guess you'll just have to find out, huh?" he replied.
What exactly does he have planned...?
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Alright, so I fixed up chapter 3. Megan's gonna go over it, and hopefully nothing about it'll be changed. I know, I know, it's short. I can't help it. She didn't give me much to work with here. But, I'll have up the actual chapter 4 in a few minutes or so, which will hopefully be a lot longer (and better). I hope you guys enjoy this, and tell us which chapter you like better (this one or the older version)!--AllApologies451994 ^-^
[Hey, you dirty motherfucker! :P Don't diss my work. I don't have as much time to waste on this stuff as you do. P.S: Don't advertise on my story. :P --ShaggyMaggie]
[P.S. (Again.) I re-did your chapter, fool! What NOW?! --ShaggyMaggie]