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Always Honest
The Beginning Is A Good Place To Start
“Riley!” My brother calls out to me from his room
“What, Ryan?!” I yell back, from the living room.
He walks in and while putting on his jacket, “Me and the guys are going out for a little bit, so I'll catch up with you later, okay? Oh, and please stay inside the house.” He says, coming out from his bedroom.
“Ryan” I roll my eyes, “Why must I stay in the house? What could possibly happen? Plus, I can make my own choices! I'm 20 years young!” I state. I'm tired of him acting like he knows everything, and what's best for me even though I hate to admit it, he really does
“First of all, your decision making skills aren't that great. You know it, and I know this. Second I'm older, third, please just this once, Just. Do. As. I. Say.” Ryan says, sounding exasperated.
“Whatever George, tell the guys I say hello and you're only older by 15 minutes.” I say with a scowl.
“Whatever those fifteen minutes make a hell of a difference, and don't worry, I will” He says, as he starts to leave the house...
“What, Ryan?!” I yell back, from the living room.
He walks in and while putting on his jacket, “Me and the guys are going out for a little bit, so I'll catch up with you later, okay? Oh, and please stay inside the house.” He says, coming out from his bedroom.
“Ryan” I roll my eyes, “Why must I stay in the house? What could possibly happen? Plus, I can make my own choices! I'm 20 years young!” I state. I'm tired of him acting like he knows everything, and what's best for me even though I hate to admit it, he really does
“First of all, your decision making skills aren't that great. You know it, and I know this. Second I'm older, third, please just this once, Just. Do. As. I. Say.” Ryan says, sounding exasperated.
“Whatever George, tell the guys I say hello and you're only older by 15 minutes.” I say with a scowl.
“Whatever those fifteen minutes make a hell of a difference, and don't worry, I will” He says, as he starts to leave the house...
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Yes, Riley is a female.Well, this is a story I wrote a while ago. I think It's pretty good, and as I go I'm making some changes. I just want to kind of play with it. Here it is, I'd appreciate feedback. I know it's short, but for this story, I think the chapters will stay pretty short, but not this short though.
- SandySnickett.