All I Want For Chrismas Isn't You

This was something I, yes, wrote on Christmas Eve. Since I am a Grinch, I continued for about a page until I got bored. One month later I finally wrote some more. 11 fucking pages to be exact.

This is set in now. But pretend that Moulin Rouge! was made in 1991.
Location in Vegas for the beginning.

Be kind. This is my baby. Something I have never attempted before plot wise.

BUT constructive critism is always welcome.

Seth is from the book Wicked Lovely. I was reading that as I wrote this. He was too damn sexy to leave out.

Now read on!
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