Shadowplay

I'm not sure I should have named this after such a good song. I'm afraid of associating its name with something that may not be very good at all.

So, I have questions for you, once you read this.
Do the characters seem consistent and realistic?
That's really my main concern.
But am I focusing too much on that and neglecting the rest of the story?

Anyway, I'd like to hear some comments on that.

And mostly, I just hope you enjoy reading it.

Oh, and Ean is pronounced like Ian, not like bean without a b.