Status: Completed, I just have to add all the chapters
That Girl
October 5th, 1938
“Who is that?”
“Who is who?”
“The girl over there, sitting by the lake?”
“Oh, she’s always there, Tommy. I think her name is Angel or something.”
“Angel?”
“Yep. Kids at school say that she hears voices or something, that she’s crazy.”
“That ain’t fair, to say that about someone you don’t know.”
“Life ain’t fair Tommy, you just got to deal with it.”
“I suppose you’re right Jim, suppose you’re right.”
October 5th, 1938
“Tommy!”
“Huh? What?”
“Stop daydreaming and get over there!”
“Get over where, what are you talking about?”
“Shelly keeps staring at you and battin’ her eyes, I think she fancies you.”
“Aw Jim, I dunno, maybe she just got sumthin’ caught in her eyes.”
”Somethin’ caught in her eyes?! You hearin’ yourself Tommy?”
“…”
“Exactly, now get over there!”
“No I don’t want- Stop pushing me…Hey Shelly.”
“Hi Tommy.”
“I-uh, like your skirt.”
“Oh do you! It’s new, my mama got it for me.”
“It’s real pretty.”
“Thanks Tommy, well I got to go…Will see you tomorrow?”
“Uh, Yeah, yeah you will.”
“Hot Damn Tom, I cannot believe you are finally going to get a girl.”
“You think I will?”
“Tom I think we need to have a few conversations about girls. ‘Cause you don’t know nothing.”
“Who is who?”
“The girl over there, sitting by the lake?”
“Oh, she’s always there, Tommy. I think her name is Angel or something.”
“Angel?”
“Yep. Kids at school say that she hears voices or something, that she’s crazy.”
“That ain’t fair, to say that about someone you don’t know.”
“Life ain’t fair Tommy, you just got to deal with it.”
“I suppose you’re right Jim, suppose you’re right.”
October 5th, 1938
“Tommy!”
“Huh? What?”
“Stop daydreaming and get over there!”
“Get over where, what are you talking about?”
“Shelly keeps staring at you and battin’ her eyes, I think she fancies you.”
“Aw Jim, I dunno, maybe she just got sumthin’ caught in her eyes.”
”Somethin’ caught in her eyes?! You hearin’ yourself Tommy?”
“…”
“Exactly, now get over there!”
“No I don’t want- Stop pushing me…Hey Shelly.”
“Hi Tommy.”
“I-uh, like your skirt.”
“Oh do you! It’s new, my mama got it for me.”
“It’s real pretty.”
“Thanks Tommy, well I got to go…Will see you tomorrow?”
“Uh, Yeah, yeah you will.”
“Hot Damn Tom, I cannot believe you are finally going to get a girl.”
“You think I will?”
“Tom I think we need to have a few conversations about girls. ‘Cause you don’t know nothing.”
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Okay so it's all dialoge but i promis you'll be able to follow, and the story is going to get a lot more intresting. It's basically a love story