50 Tips for Writing.

8. Format your story

Use paragraphs. No one wants to strain his or her eyes at the screen, trying to guess the general meaning behind a solid block of text. In fifth grade, I learnt the famous rule,
"One speaker, one line".
It doesn't matter which grade your English teacher taught you that concept, just follow it and your readers will love your for not making them go cross eyed. That is, if they haven't exited out of your story and ran off to find a more pleasing format story to read. If you can be bothered, go Google basic HTML tutorials, you can even transform your text into a respectably tidy Arial, Times New Roman or a slight fancier Comic Sans MS font face.