According to Him

She left her country for the man she loved, leaving a family she misses. But she can't say no when her brother needs her the most. Against her fiance's will she rushes across the world just to be by his side. She never questioned her decisions in life until she meets her brother's teammate, who from the moment he saw her, was determined to win her over more than the cup his team is after. She secretly accepts a bet, positive to win it but after her world shifts she's not sure whenever she wants to win it anymore...

I worked on this chapter in my Creative Arts class and I was wondering what you thought of it.